3. I owe you a lot for your help/what you’ve done for me.

　　4. I’ll never forget your help and I will remember all the happy times we shared together.

　　5. I hope you can be happy/healthy, forever.

　　6. I wish you good luck/health!

【普通作文】

　　Dear Miss Wang:

　　I’m glad to write to you.

　　You are such a kind and easy-going teacher that we all like you. I remember that at first I hated learning new English words very much and I even wanted to give up. When you noticed this, you had a talk with me. You told me some good ways to remember those words and encouraged me never to give up. I’ve made great progress in English and now I’m a top student in English.

　　I want to say thanks. I will work harder in the future. I hope you can be happy and healthy forever.

　　Yours,

　　Linda

　　点评：

　　本文信息点齐全，层次比较清楚，语言比较通顺，句式也有一定的变化。作者首先用一个so…that 句式将老师随和、善良的特点勾勒出来，接下来回忆了老师是如何在自己当初因讨厌背单词而想放弃学英语时对自己无私的帮助。结尾处，对于老师的感谢和祝福也就水到渠成，感情真挚、自然。